Monday, March 29, 2010

i..as a child wrote too..and i hope i grew

As a class assignment when I was in the seventh grade my English teacher pulled out newspapers. She instructed us to pick a section read the articles and write a response based on the piece. I read and read and read some more. Everything seemed to be talking some war or another. And I wasn't sure which had to do with U.S., the U.N., Afghanistan, or Iraq....well you catch my drift.
The headline that stood out to me the most touched me in a place that made me want to imagine from the victims POV:

African Girls Serve As Prostitutes For U.N/U.S. Soldiers

So I wrote from the POV of one of the African girls. Of course it is totally fictional. Keep in mind this was originally written during my seventh grade year.

F R E E D O M

Freedom
Freedom
Oh the sweet sound
That word gave
Freedom from scrounging and 
Begging
Freedom from the tears
That burn in the mildewed 
state of the night
When I am alone.

Freedom from giving myself to
any bidder.

Of course, I knew it was wrong.
When I first looked upon
The cruel sun tanned faces.

Oh, I knew it was wrong but 
Don’t get confused
I knew it was wrong when I gave it to my own.

He called for me…
He continuously asked for
This young African girl
Unsure of herself, her world, her purpose in life.
He called for me,
Loudly whispering my name 
Begging for me to be near him.

In the darkness of the night 
He would touch me.
In the quiet of an abandoned building
He kissed me.

And then
When he had his share…
He sent others
Fellow camo wearing brothers

Freedom
Freedom
The sweet sound,
The bitter taste,
 The licorice dream.


2 comments:

  1. oooooh dope!!!. i love it!
    *snaps* to you.

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  2. thank you..lol..i pretty much wrote it in the seventh grade..and did a re-edit a few years ago..im glad you like it..it stands out even against the stuff i've been writing recently

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